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Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Good intro
Good detail
Explains importance of speech well
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
Should and an experience of when you had to do a speech and describe how you felt.
Repeat yourself a lot
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Great description at the very beginning
The importance of public speaking
How the class can help you in the future
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (Praise)
I liked it a lot, great transitions, great descriptions.
Also great length
April 24, 2008 at 9:13 am
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # ___3__
Writer _________Rexhina_____________________ Peer Respondent ___________Jordan___________________
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Good intro
Good detail
Explains importance of speech well
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
Should and an experience of when you had to do a speech and describe how you felt.
Repeat yourself a lot
(?) Questions?
April 24, 2008 at 9:14 am
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # _3___
Writer _Rexhina______ Peer Respondent __Dayna_______________________
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Great description at the very beginning
The importance of public speaking
How the class can help you in the future
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
(?) Questions?
April 24, 2008 at 9:17 am
Essay # __3___
Writer ____Rexhina__________________________ Peer Respondent ________Rosario__________
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (Praise)
I liked it a lot, great transitions, great descriptions.
Also great length
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
Check sentence structure
(?) Questions?
Is there going to be any additions for length